. Poetry from The Great In-Between: If Grief was a Senryu

Thursday, November 10, 2022

If Grief was a Senryu




  •   Like a message lost

  • As unknown high seas claimed them

  • Should you swim to look


  • (C)
  • Copyright John Duffy


  • A recent theme from an exploration of human emotions.

  • The questions asked in quiet reflection of the soul, enduring grief.

  • Should we cling onto those dearly, departed?


  • The Sea


  • The metaphor reflecting the emotional ocean of feelings linked to loss.

  • Such as denial, anger, bargaining, depression, and acceptance.


  • The image in the bottle.

  • Reflects the emotional attachments surrounding the person in question.

Like a message in a bottle.

  • Such as memories. Stories, etc.

  • Personally, I think we should always keep looking for them.


  • To swim deep in that ocean.
  • Come what may.

  • Salute.

  • Senryu
  • SenryĆ« is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 syllables. 

Line 1 has 5.
Line 2 has 7.
Line 3 has 5

  • SenryĆ« tends to be about human emotions.


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