- Like a message lost
- As unknown high seas claimed them
- Should you swim to look
- (C)
- Copyright John Duffy
- A recent theme from an exploration of human emotions.
- The questions asked in quiet reflection of the soul, enduring grief.
- Should we cling onto those dearly, departed?
- The Sea
- The metaphor reflecting the emotional ocean of feelings linked to loss.
- Such as denial, anger, bargaining, depression, and acceptance.
- The image in the bottle.
- Reflects the emotional attachments surrounding the person in question.
Like a message in a bottle.
- Such as memories. Stories, etc.
- Personally, I think we should always keep looking for them.
- To swim deep in that ocean.
- Come what may.
- Salute.
- Senryu
- Senryƫ is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 syllables.
Line 1 has 5.
Line 2 has 7.
Line 3 has 5
- Senryƫ tends to be about human emotions.
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