. Poetry from The Great In-Between: Astral Dreams

Thursday, August 13, 2026

Astral Dreams

 



A surreal, dreamlike journey through a dark, symbolic landscape populated by famous literary figures like Lord Byron, Carol Ann Duffy, and Edgar Allan Poe. 


Blending Gothic elements with themes of isolation, magical transformation, and a final, painful return to self-awareness and healing. 


Literary Allusions & Figures: 


Lord Byron & Carol Ann Duffy: Represent romantic grandeur mixed with contemporary, poignant observation. 


Edward Thomas & Gretel: 


A blend of a real-world war poet (Thomas) with a fairytale archetype (Gretel), staging a surreal wedding.


Louise Glück & Conrad Aiken: 


Figures of profound introspection and gothic haunting standing witness in the gloom.


Edgar Allan Poe & Robert Frost: 


Poe anchors the dark, gothic, raven-esque atmosphere, while Frost serves as a psychological alchemist, conjuring a storm of fear.


Themes: Isolation and Safety: 


The narrator seeks safety in numbers of literary ghosts while wandering a dark, astral forest. 


Surreal Transformation:


Fairy-tale innocence meets literary melancholy in candlelight.


Redemption: 


The storm leads back to a rose-petalled path, suggesting that true healing and self-discovery ("the one called Elkind") are found only through brokenness and deep introspection.


(A lone voice whispers) 


Lost in the Ballard of Reading 

In the Darkness 


With the narrating

Well dressed

Lord Byron


I found a distressed Carol Ann Duffy


Wandering

Lonely 


In the Dark


And in that Dark Forest

As we held hands 


For safety 


As we wandered

In that strange astral park


We found a candlelit clearing 


And watched as

Edward Thomas

Dressed in blue


Propose to the stunning Gretel 


Dressed in white

Ivory 


As we hid

Hiding 

In the Darkness 


Watching that surreal scene


Like a candlelit priory


Like how 

The marriage was overlooked 


By the beautiful smiling

Louise Glück


In that deep gulf


With The Vampire called Conrad Aiken


Who many had tried 

To put a stake in


Dressed in red and black


And The Raven 

Edgar Allan Poe


And as my favourite dream faded 


Before I could see Thomas and Gretel

Conjugated


As time flowed  

I came to be lost


Suspended and swept up 


In a Storm of Fear 


Conjured up by the alchemist and magician


Robert Frost


Only to find my way home


Walking the rose-petalled pathway

Only the broken can find


The one called Elkind


Etched and inscribed 

In the heartbroken blind


Recesses of the mind


(C) 

Copyright John Duffy

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