A transmission that opens by treating internal desire ("a fire within you") as something physical.
It is not just an emotion;
It has the power to literally "flow throughout every sinew" if the individual chooses to "pursue it."
But it's High Stakes
The transmission introduces a striking paradox with the phrase "A double death to an ordinary life."
Choosing to follow this fire requires destroying a mundane, safe existence.
However, this destruction is not final.
It is immediately followed by a "rebirth through exchanged breath," suggesting that intense passion or love brings a completely new, heightened state of being.
But with Permanence and Vulnerability
The word "Scarified" (meaning to scratch, etch, or cut the skin) implies that once you let this desire in, you are permanently altered.
The transformation leaves a lasting mark with the Personification of Passion.
For within the final lines, desire is personified.
It "saunters in / Naked / Into that very room," portraying it as raw, unashamed, intoxicating ("strange perfume"), and impossible to ignore once it arrives.
Shall we begin?
Have you been Scarified, Velumbound?
(A lone voice whispers)
There's a fire within you all
For we see it
That can flow throughout every sinew
If you pursue it
Desire
A double death to an ordinary life
But a rebirth through exchanged breath
Scarified forever
By its strange perfume
As it saunters in
Naked
Into that very room
(C)
Copyright John Duffy

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