. Poetry from The Great In-Between: Has the Serpent (The Nāḥāš) visited you?

Wednesday, November 4, 2026

Has the Serpent (The Nāḥāš) visited you?

 


This poignant transmission explores the profound duality of human existence, contrasting a lifelong romantic ideal with the devastating reality of sudden loss and grief.


Structurally, the transmission relies on an extended metaphor built around the "stages of the day" (Dawn, Twilight, Night) to map out the journey of a relationship from its youthful inception to its ultimate fate.



The Intrusion of the Serpent (The Nāḥāš):


The tone shifts dramatically with the introduction of the Nāḥāš (the Hebrew word for the serpent in the Garden of Eden). 


This choice of language is deliberate and powerful. 


By framing the tragedy as a smiling, deceptive serpent or a "dark thief in the night," the transmission elevates a personal loss into a cosmic, archetypal betrayal. 


It implies that the destruction of this perfect love is akin to the Fall of Man. 


An expulsion from paradise.


(A lone voice whispers) 


In the Dawn of Life, 

Maybe even at high school


Did you embrace one of life's golden rules


To hold hands, encouraged by first love's sweet kiss


To carry you through to the supercool, Twilight of your Life


With the only true one, whose love has never cooled:


And if you're still incredibly lucky, brings you such bliss 


Or did the Shadows of Life appear 


Smiling like a Nāḥāš

Like a dark thief in the night


To take back God's divine gift, and leave you scrambling and grieving 


Daydreaming of the Dawn and Twilight of your Life


Before something cruel caused you to separate and drift


When everything seemed so perfect and nice 


Before the cut of The Shadows of Life's sharp, ceremonial knife


(C) Copyright John Duffy 






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