A surreal, dreamlike journey through a dark, symbolic landscape populated by famous literary figures like Lord Byron, Carol Ann Duffy, and Edgar Allan Poe.
Blending Gothic elements with themes of isolation, magical transformation, and a final, painful return to self-awareness and healing.
Literary Allusions & Figures:
Lord Byron & Carol Ann Duffy: Represent romantic grandeur mixed with contemporary, poignant observation.
Edward Thomas & Gretel:
A blend of a real-world war poet (Thomas) with a fairytale archetype (Gretel), staging a surreal wedding.
Louise Glück & Conrad Aiken:
Figures of profound introspection and gothic haunting standing witness in the gloom.
Edgar Allan Poe & Robert Frost:
Poe anchors the dark, gothic, raven-esque atmosphere, while Frost serves as a psychological alchemist, conjuring a storm of fear.
Themes: Isolation and Safety:
The narrator seeks safety in numbers of literary ghosts while wandering a dark, astral forest.
Surreal Transformation:
Fairy-tale innocence meets literary melancholy in candlelight.
Redemption:
The storm leads back to a rose-petalled path, suggesting that true healing and self-discovery ("the one called Elkind") are found only through brokenness and deep introspection.
(A lone voice whispers)
Lost in the Ballard of Reading
In the Darkness
With the narrating
Well dressed
Lord Byron
I found a distressed Carol Ann Duffy
Wandering
Lonely
In the Dark
And in that Dark Forest
As we held hands
For safety
As we wandered
In that strange astral park
We found a candlelit clearing
And watched as
Edward Thomas
Dressed in blue
Propose to the stunning Gretel
Dressed in white
Ivory
As we hid
Hiding
In the Darkness
Watching that surreal scene
Like a candlelit priory
Like how
The marriage was overlooked
By the beautiful smiling
Louise Glück
In that deep gulf
With The Vampire called Conrad Aiken
Who many had tried
To put a stake in
Dressed in red and black
And The Raven
Edgar Allan Poe
And as my favourite dream faded
Before I could see Thomas and Gretel
Conjugated
As time flowed
I came to be lost
Suspended and swept up
In a Storm of Fear
Conjured up by the alchemist and magician
Robert Frost
Only to find my way home
Walking the rose-petalled pathway
Only the broken can find
The one called Elkind
Etched and inscribed
In the heartbroken blind
Recesses of the mind
(C)
Copyright John Duffy




